Expanding Man

Looking inside us
I am the constant
you are a variable
time is control

When you leave
your sent is with me
At times I find comfort
on your pillow

In your smile
the warmthof a thousand days

With your touch
strength is Melted
and Solidified
I am invincible

Looking inside us
as you bloom
I surely am
the Expanding Man


by villagepeasanton Dec. 04, 2008 at 10:43am
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We are not meant to be alone. Together we thrive and find fulfilment. Thank you Aday.

by margoon Dec. 04, 2008 at 02:37pm
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deacon blue... steely dan had a song with those words in it (these are the days of the expanding man) ........and now ........ through your poem.........i understand it. good work, ADay.

by Sparkson Dec. 04, 2008 at 04:47pm
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Very lovely. I liked this one a lot, especially the way this one sounds when read aloud.
Nicely done.

by AdayINtheLifeon Dec. 04, 2008 at 05:29pm
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Thanks VP , Margo , Sparks ... I always read them aloud ... one of my quirks Margo , Thanks for reminding me of that song. That was one of my favorite albums when I was young. Expanding Man is also the name of a band. They are on the sound track for "The Cable Guy" with Jim Carry. The song is called Download.

by CatGemon Dec. 04, 2008 at 10:31pm
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lovely :-)

by Kayzzamanon Dec. 05, 2008 at 11:57am
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Excellent way of reaching the human destiny...

by mjeveron Dec. 08, 2008 at 12:19am
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Some of God's best work in us happens as we are stretched and in this case expanded by the love and lives of those we hold dearest to our hearts.